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5-7-5 - 1370°C

May. 7th, 2005

01:46 pm - 5-7-5

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elegantelbow tells me that it's Haiku day. so:

funny:

there once was a man...
wrong. i must restart, this is
not a limerick.

not funny:

mere coincidence?
petals fallen from flowers
mimic sympathy

and just 'cause:

why dear Mr. Brecht
does it take you two hours
to say that life sucks?

Current Mood: not-so big in Japan

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From:endon_neu
Date:May 7th, 2005 06:32 am (UTC)
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I laughed at the first
The second is really sweet
I'm crap at haikus

;p
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From:ferrousoxide
Date:May 7th, 2005 07:07 am (UTC)
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idealistic
correspond in haiku alone
like Tale of Genji
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From:ferrousoxide
Date:May 7th, 2005 07:10 am (UTC)
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ok, technically, i know that haiku is wrong, in Genji, they corresponded in waka poems, of which haiku is a shortened version of one of the subsets...but still...

the time approaches
are you ready to go out?
Hitchhiker's awaits
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From:0x23
Date:May 7th, 2005 09:23 am (UTC)
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there once was a man...
wrong. i must restart, this is
not a limerick.


Ha!
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